Lesson ARG.20 Sample Essay: From a 3 to a 4
Lesson ARG.20 Sample Essay: From a 3 to a 4
Student Edition, page 260
Read this blog (tinyurl.com/yesmanat) to see another sample essay with comments showing its strengths and weaknesses.
Lesson ARG.21 Sample Essay: From a 4 to a 5
Lesson ARG.21 Sample Essay: From a 4 to a 5
Student Edition, page 264
Watch this video by AP teacher Beth Hall, which includes valuable information on commentary, including suggestions for strong verbs. After watching, make additional revisions to your paragraph using those suggestions.