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Lesson ARG.20 Sample Essay: From a 3 to a 4

Student Edition, page 260

Read this blog (tinyurl.com/yesmanat) to see another sample essay with comments showing its strengths and weaknesses.

Lesson ARG.21 Sample Essay: From a 4 to a 5

Student Edition, page 264

Watch this video by AP teacher Beth Hall, which includes valuable information on commentary, including suggestions for strong verbs. After watching, make additional revisions to your paragraph using those suggestions.

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